It's Hyrulian damn you! When the creature from the Dark World was speaking, he said "Hyrulean" and that just cut a nerve. Sorry, I'm very passionate about it lol. Ahh my apologies, truly, but you've GOT to fix that ASAP. Also, another typo in there was "then" rather than "than", just watch out for those little things.
And now that the initial wave has been blurted out mindlessly, I must congratulate you on a fine movie. The talking really slowed it down quite unnecessarily though. I had time to do other things while they were speaking. I know it was for effect, but you should either speed it up considerably or put a button in so viewers can decide when to move on. Just my advice.
The scene where the creature from the Dark World was escaping was also quite frankly rather lame. They ran so slowly lol, dodgy kind of graphics as well. I don't blame you in the slightest for that though, all in all, it was better executed than I would have thought. I can't help but think that the third guy could have gotten away if he'd kept running around the corner. Still, didn't quite like that scene.
Finally on the critique side of things, wasn't it Princess Zelda who had the prophetic dreams? Link had troubled sleep and dreams of his own, but it was Zelda's who more accurately predicted such events. Nonetheless, fair enough.
Otherwise, it was really quite brilliant. A Zelda tribute no doubt, but as just the start of the series, it has yet to prove it's potential. You've got alot of it building though, kudos to that. The graphics, to me, seemed better done than the actual game itself. Editted to be clearer somehow, nicely done sir. I hope you can make another one of these movies soon, I would very much like to see the series continued.
You also did exceptionally well with the choice of music, classics. I also can't help but think, wouldn't "Tales of the Legend" be a better title? Sorry for being such an ass about this by the way, I really did like it alot better than I made it sound. You've done well, don't get disheartened, and I hope you can fix the Hyrulian thing lol. Ciao~
~VelvetDarkRocks~